Writing is a process, and the first draft is rarely perfect. Strong writers improve their work through revision. After reviewing and revising your literary argument paragraph, what changes did you make to strengthen your writing?

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 Prompt: in the first draft of my writing I put a ton of context before my first piece of evidence. This weekend my argument because it didn't date my opinion on the topic with a present amount of evidence before halfway through the essay. If you are providing too much contacts before you provide your evidence you will have less to connect the evidence to the text. So I rearranged my essay to better fit and increase the strength of my essay. 

Summary: today we watched a video about AI

Reflection: When writing there are always be times where the first draft that you write won't be perfect and there'll have to be many changes that you need to make to it. But this isn't something to worry about because it happens to everyone. Revising is a vital step to better increase the overall sound of your essay. 

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